Show 1- Midnight Mayhem Feedback

Hey guys, first show has finished and i would like to here what you guys think of the show. Give us some advice or suggestions to what you want to see featured in the show. If you want you can use this template

Best Match:

Favorite RP:

Favorite Line:

Best Persona (Character):

Ideas/Suggestions:

Rating (Out of 10):

Comments:

Best Match: Silver wolf vs Son Goku (Awesome match)

Favorite RP: Kai`s Introduction.

Favorite Line:Vegeta sure runs his mouth.

Best Persona (Character): Kai the Demon

Ideas/Suggestions: Improvement on role play `s

Rating (Out of 10):9.5 out of 10

Comments: Excellent debut for MWF

i don't have a favorite so ill skip to the bottom 3 stuff


Ideas/Suggestions: if you watch some of the other shows you will notice that it makes our show look empty without a background

Rating (Out of 10): im gonna give it a 6.5

Comments: good debut for MWF. i did however notice some typo's in the commentary idk if they was intentional or not, but thought id bring it up

joey5151 wrote:
Ideas/Suggestions: if you watch some of the other shows you will notice that it makes our show look empty without a background

*shakes fist*

Ideas/Suggestions: I loved commentary being inserted in matches. The only thing what kind of hit my eyes were typos. I think both RP and everything else "hand-made" could use either second reading, or a corrector. TWG is full of typos to start with though, is not a huge deal (in matches, read it, there really are!)

Rating (Out of 10): 9/10

The backround is Ms. Riani's job for next week. She get's today and tomorrow off.

However, other then me not centering everything perfectly, I do think that it was a great debut for us and our major will be even better. Especially with a special surprise Kai has coming for the roster.

I'm giving this an 8/10, since it's an debut. I'd say the commentary needs improvement, and that the latter matches are lacking commentary in the entirety.

I take full responsibility for the commentry. I did 6 matches all taking around 2 hours, but with robert angel and son goku also doing commentry now it can only improve